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lilac inspirations
or gentle mists of absence
like times of frozen perspiration
kissing deep
with tender release
forgetting first impressions
lulling to sleep the ageless cries
vibrant dreams
surrounded by the softest skin
fingertips forever
destined
to caress burning desire
whispering
soft poetry in aching ears
filling souls with love
to drain
©2003-2009 ~nelsmiley
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nice...
after a hard day, reading this is kinda relaxing...

thanks!

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flying lead. I want lots of it.
Good flow, vivid language, good little peice :)

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"for he is everything and nothing,
hero and fool,
potent, helpless-
and with one world of truth or treachery
he will save or damn the Earth
because he is mad and sane,
cold and passionate,
lost and found."

-The Unbeliever
this is great
love it
every single one of your poems are fantastic.

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"Sometimes I gaze into my reflection, but the only thing I see is my sorrow"
I am impressed when I read the first two lines.. Great work nel :)

I really like this: "lilac inspirations, or gentle mists of absence."

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Regards,
Yuen-Chi Lian
wonderful piece of work. i love it. yay! :clap: :)

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:hug:

Have you hugged anyone today?

Do it!
..like plucked strings ..Beautiful!

cheers,
Shan
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"whispering
soft poetry in aching ears"

sweet line.

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nothing
the world was hot as hell
the cola was tepid
and then
ice was born
you are the ice in the cola of life on a scorcher day, menel.
^_^

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"It's a crystal, nothing more. But if you turn it this way, and look into it, it will show you your dreams."
the Goblin King

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